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Monday 8 June 2015

The giant soup

The giant soup
Once there was a giant and he made a soup . The giant’s mother was going on a holiday. What shall I eat, Mum?” asked the giant. “Make some soup said the giants mother the giant put a big pot of water on the stove. He cut up some onions and put them in the water. Then he tried it. This soup is no good said the giant. It must have carrots in it. The giant went out to his garden and got some carrots He put them into the soup then he tried it again this soup is no good said the giant it must have beef bone in it he went to his refrigerator and got a beef bone he put it into the soup then he tried the soup again this soup is still no good said the giant it must have a boy in it he put on his giant sneakers and ran quietly out into the world A boy called jason was walking home from school he was reading a book as he walked along the giant came up quietly behind jason and caught him he took him home and popped him into the big pot of soup i might as well go home then said jason i’ll come in tomorrow and see hows your getting on i’m cooking a cake tomorrow said the giant id better come and help you said jason And i’ll bring my recipe book oh no no no you eat too much cried the giant don’t come back ever ever ever .



by Ariana.

2 comments:

  1. Great to see your blog up and running Ariana, welcome to the world of sharing your learning online. I can't wait to see more. I really enjoyed the way your story ended with a 'moral' and the giant learning something! Keep up the awesome blogging :-) James

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  2. Hi Ariana,

    I like that you started your blog. You made some mistakes like sometimes you forget full stops when ending a sentence. Other than that I love your story. Keep up the GREAT WORK!

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